When a copyeditor works on your novel, they keep a document beside it. Every time they make a decision (“grey, not gray”, “OK, not okay”, “the Old Town, capitalised”), it goes on the list, so the same word is handled the same way in chapter twenty-three. That list is the style sheet. At the end it comes back to you with the manuscript, and the proofreader works from it later.

Publishers have house style guides for the general rules. The style sheet is for the decisions that belong to your book.

What’s on one

SectionExamples
Spellinggrey, judgement, OK, email, Mr (no full stop, UK)
Namesevery character and place, spelled once, with nicknames
Hyphenationwell-being, a long-term plan, the long term, ten-year-old girl
Capitalisationthe Inspector (title) but an inspector (job), the Thames, the north of England
Numbersspell out one to a hundred, digits for years and times, 221B
Invented wordsspells, places, slang, with how they’re spelled and whether they’re italic
Punctuationserial comma or not, single or double quotes, spaced en dash or closed em dash
Key factsages, dates, eye colours, the layout of the house

That last row overlaps with a story bible, and some writers keep them together. The difference is that a style sheet is about how words appear on the page, and a story bible is about what’s true in the story.

Why start one yourself

Most of the inconsistencies a copyeditor fixes are ones you created by deciding the same thing twice, a few months apart. “Toward” in chapter three, “towards” in chapter nineteen. If you’d written “towards” down the first time, you’d have stopped thinking about it.

It also saves you money. Copyeditors charge by the word or the hour, and a manuscript that’s already consistent is quicker to edit. And it makes the conversation easier: if your copyeditor sees “grey” on your sheet, they know it’s a choice and not a mistake.

If you’re writing a series, the style sheet is how book three matches book one. (The series bible post has more on that.)

Picking the rules

If you’re not sure which way to go on the general rules, pick a regional standard and follow it. US fiction mostly follows the Chicago Manual of Style, and UK fiction follows New Hart’s Rules or a publisher’s own guide. The UK vs US style page has the main differences side by side, from quote marks to “-ise” and “-ize”.

How Galley does it

Every book in Galley has a Style sheet tab in the story bible, where you write your decisions down as you make them. The names live on the character and location pages next to it.

The consistency sweep then checks the book against itself: British and American spellings mixed together, a word hyphenated two different ways, straight quotes, double spaces, and small numbers in digits where publishers usually spell them out. It tells you which spelling the book mostly uses and lists the ones that don’t match, and it skips dialogue, because a character can say “colour” in an American book. It doesn’t change anything for you. The revision docs list everything it looks for, and the glossary has the short definition.